Monday, 11 June 2012

My Sad Poem


She never seemed to bob
on her sister's
Silver mattered bike
I watched for
not yet able to see
The high seat
working her way
Up car free Penn street
and i would make as if
I hadn't seen her
when she rode by

We were but children
in a garden of Eden
Made just for us two
wher nothing else mattered
But you where loved by me
And i was loved by you.

'First Love' By Charles.c.Cingolani

I picked this poem because it has short sentances that have alot of impact on the reader.

1 comment:

  1. Nice choice Sophie, I like it! Target: Make sure you take care with 'were' and 'where' &

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